Heres a great poem performed by an American Slam Team from Denver
Monday, 21 May 2012
Slam Poetry Techniques
Our Masterclass and final slam days are quickly approaching. Here are some tips to remember, which you can practice at school or at home.
- Know Your Poems
- Its important to be as familiar with your poems as possible, this
allows you to give a better performance. If you can, itd be great if you can
learn your poems by heart.
- Add tone, pace and intonation in your delivery of poems
- When reading a poem, try and use as many vocal techniques as you
can. Play with the pace of the poem, some lines you should read quick, some
slow. Experiment with tone, if you are asking a question, make sure you raise
your voice at the end of a sentence. If the poem is a serious piece, make sure
you read it with as much conviction as possible.
- Gesticulation, movement, body posture and eye contact.
- A performance starts as soon as you stand on the stage. When you
start make sure you look confident. Start with your feet a shoulder length
apart, your back straight and your head held high. Remember you are performing
to an audience, so try and make eye contact with different audience members. If
this makes you nervous, concentrate on one space at the back of the room, and
try and project your voice so everyone can hear you. It often works well if you
add hand gestures to certain lines, or can add movement to your performances.
- Enjoy yourself.
- Its not easy to perform to an audience, and you can feel nervous,
especially when reading something you’ve written. But remember the audience want
to see you succeed, and if you are having fun, an audience can tell, and slam
judges will mark your piece accordingly. Also, this is all about self
expression, this is a chance for you to express what you have to say.
Wednesday, 14 March 2012
Danum School
The third and final of my days taking the South Yorkshire Poetry
Slam into schools saw me and
Charlotte head over to Danum academy to work with some year 7's and, as a one
off, some year nines (with some year 8s watching)
The poems written were all fantastic, ranging from supernatural
preoccupations to the Iraq war to the sinking of the Titanic; anyone who says
kids only see poetry and rhyme as a vehicle for nonsense and glib comments
would have been challenged by the intensity and intelligence on show from the
pupils. We ended the day with a
really strong bunch of twelve who are hoping they can beat Balby Carr (winning
the whole slam is a distant second to this particular aim of asserting
dominance over local Doncaster rivals)
All the young people seemed to have a great time and the school
was welcoming and accommodating to the oft frantic pace these Slam days can
create; it's a cliche but all the kids deserved to win or go through. It isn't
the prizes, maybe it's not even the poems it's the participation that
counts. Building something from
nothing, creating something out of yourself, making poetry
Andrew McMillan
Monday, 12 March 2012
Teachers!
Heres a good exercise you could lead with your pupils to stop them censoring themselves when they are writing. Taken from www.poetryclass.net where there are lots of other exercises listed by Key Stage.
Free Writing
AimsTo encourage fluency in writing.
To practice writing without self-censoring.
Materials
Pen/pencil
2 clean pages
Pen/pencil
2 clean pages
Step 1
Introduce Guidelines:
Introduce Guidelines:
1. Keep your hand moving. (Write everything)
2. Be specific. Not tree, but sycamore. Not car, but Mini.
3. Don't think. Go with your first thoughts.
4. Don't worry about spelling, punctuation or grammar.
(You can go back to this after the exercise)
5. You are free to write the worst rubbish ever written.
(Give yourself permission to make mistakes!)
Step 2
Try this timed writing for three minutes.
Begin it with 'I remember...' and keep going.
When you get stuck and feel you have nothing to say, write, 'I remember...' again and keep going.
Once you get going try to follow your mind where ever it takes you.
After the three minutes, stop.
Try this timed writing for three minutes.
Begin it with 'I remember...' and keep going.
When you get stuck and feel you have nothing to say, write, 'I remember...' again and keep going.
Once you get going try to follow your mind where ever it takes you.
After the three minutes, stop.
Step 3
Now go for another three minutes. Begin on a clean sheet.
This time begin with 'I don't remember...' and keep going.
What are the things you don't care to remember, but remember underneath all the same.
Keep going, even if you write 'how can I write about what I don't remember...' Write.
Now go for another three minutes. Begin on a clean sheet.
This time begin with 'I don't remember...' and keep going.
What are the things you don't care to remember, but remember underneath all the same.
Keep going, even if you write 'how can I write about what I don't remember...' Write.
Variations
I want.../ I don't want...
I like.../ I don't like...
I am.../ I am not...
I want.../ I don't want...
I like.../ I don't like...
I am.../ I am not...
Follow-up
Refine into a more structured piece. (e.g.10 syllables per line)
Use as a basis for an exercise in re-writing from a draft.
Refine into a more structured piece. (e.g.10 syllables per line)
Use as a basis for an exercise in re-writing from a draft.
Example
"...
I don't remember the sound
the jab of your words shattering me
as you chatted on dismissing a quiet plea
saying again don't be boring shuddering
as another piece hit the playground tarmac
spreading into a pool of once-me
trampled again and again
by my big sister's silences and refusals
to look me in the eye at least
I don't remember my wanting you
to do the enid blyton best friend thing
and rescue me from the little girls that bullied me
..."
Extract from 'Forget' by Dorothea Smartt
(p.27-8, Connecting Medium, Peepal Tree Press, 2001)
© Dorothea Smartt, adapted from Natalie Goldberg's 'Wild Mind', Rider, 1991
Balby Carr
The first workshop as part of this great slam project was
certainly a baptism of fire; ninety year seven kids, split between three poets
(myself,Charlotte and Sarah) with an ultimate 12 winners being chosen to go
forward.
Each poet took thirty kids off to work with them on some initial
ideas and, from this selection, 24 were invited back for a further masterclass;
it was such a great mix of kids, those who were already confident, those who
were shy and those who had never written before-everyone produced incredible
work and it was a shame the competitive element of the day meant that only a
few of the children could progress
The final 12 are a great choice though and represent a full
cross section of the year group; they should be a force to be reckoned with at
the south Yorkshire final in the summer!
Sunday, 11 March 2012
City School
Tuesday 6th March saw Andrew and I wending our way to City School for a day in the plush surroundings of the school library in the brand new CLC building. We were greeted by some enthusiastic and talented writers who weren’t afraid to tackle controversial or sensitive subjects (the Hillsborough disaster, 10 ways to annoy the bus driver to name two) as well as some on trend offerings on spooky vampires and Facebook. There was even a hard to classify highly idiosyncratic missive on the subject of ‘paperclips!’ The final between 12 students from Mrs Hughes’ class pitting their wits against 12 from Ms Plant’s class with 0.2 points in it was too close to call and overall we had a really fantastic day; hopefully the 60 students who took part did too. Charlotte Ansell
Tuesday 6th March saw Andrew and I wending our way to City School for a day in the plush surroundings of the school library in the brand new CLC building. We were greeted by some enthusiastic and talented writers who weren’t afraid to tackle controversial or sensitive subjects (the Hillsborough disaster, 10 ways to annoy the bus driver to name two) as well as some on trend offerings on spooky vampires and Facebook. There was even a hard to classify highly idiosyncratic missive on the subject of ‘paperclips!’ The final between 12 students from Mrs Hughes’ class pitting their wits against 12 from Ms Plant’s class with 0.2 points in it was too close to call and overall we had a really fantastic day; hopefully the 60 students who took part did too. Charlotte Ansell
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